Very nice work on the re-dos, Jane. I like the bridge one very much. The wine country related one works a lot better with the clearer indication of vinyards. Good work, and thanks for posting.
I think these two reworked sketches look really great! I especially love the new bridge one. You can definitely tell you thought about the composition, and it appears much more dynamic here than in your previous one. Also, great job on the faces. I know from class it was pointed out that you might have been nervous drawing them, but they really help a lot. =) Awesome!
I remember you said you were iffy about drawing faces, so I just wanted to note, if you haven't already started on the finals, that I think the style of the facial features in the second sketch works much better than in the first, so you might want to stick with that one. Just my opinion though. And my run-on sentence, apparently.
Thanks for the feedback about the faces...I cleaned up the compostion just a little more on the bridge for the final. I also added frames for both of them so that they look cohesive.
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Very nice work on the re-dos, Jane.
I like the bridge one very much. The wine country related one works a lot better with the clearer indication of vinyards. Good work, and thanks for posting.
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These are really awesome. your compositions seem more confident and the colors are really pretty exciting. great job, jane!
I think these two reworked sketches look really great! I especially love the new bridge one. You can definitely tell you thought about the composition, and it appears much more dynamic here than in your previous one. Also, great job on the faces. I know from class it was pointed out that you might have been nervous drawing them, but they really help a lot. =) Awesome!
- Lyse
I remember you said you were iffy about drawing faces, so I just wanted to note, if you haven't already started on the finals, that I think the style of the facial features in the second sketch works much better than in the first, so you might want to stick with that one. Just my opinion though. And my run-on sentence, apparently.
Thanks for the feedback about the faces...I cleaned up the compostion just a little more on the bridge for the final. I also added frames for both of them so that they look cohesive.
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