Sunday, February 18, 2007

some logan's run

here's one of my finals and I feel as though it's missing something but I'm not entirely sure what it needs...

2 comments:

fashionillustrationclass said...

Well, this looks super-great! I do agree that you might need "something" though. Maybe try to do something with a colored line, just in line, through the doorway. Maybe a group of 3 or more people walking down that hallway? I know it's prolly not in the movie, but it might look great with a pink, red, or warmer blue line back there or something. Try it digitally first to see what it looks like. Don;t muck with that origional too much until you know whats up, cause it looks really great!


---->d.

Andrea said...

ok, thanks! I'll give that a try, and yeah, I'm kind of dying for at least a hint of a warmer color in there.