I guess I should mention that the bottom piece is supposed to be a rendition of the scene where Hecket chews out the wierd sisters. Also, was there a time that these were supposed to be up by? The post just said by the 3rd, but I feel like I must be behind. If so I apologize. I was driving home for most of today and it took longer than I expected.
I appreciate the rawness and intensity of these, but I'm not sure if there is enough going on here. The guitar smashing is great, but without type or anything to ground it to the content, I'm getting a little lost. An interesting start, but these need to be refined more. They're feeling a little half baked at the moment. I would revisit the composition also, and consider clothing and setting etc.
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I guess I should mention that the bottom piece is supposed to be a rendition of the scene where Hecket chews out the wierd sisters. Also, was there a time that these were supposed to be up by? The post just said by the 3rd, but I feel like I must be behind. If so I apologize. I was driving home for most of today and it took longer than I expected.
I appreciate the rawness and intensity of these, but I'm not sure if there is enough going on here. The guitar smashing is great, but without type or anything to ground it to the content, I'm getting a little lost. An interesting start, but these need to be refined more. They're feeling a little half baked at the moment. I would revisit the composition also, and consider clothing and setting etc.
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